Silence I sense inside myself
Hushing the toil from my bed
For a moment I feel not lonely
When I step into imaginary
Sun is waiting for my lead
Pain is struggling to get to me
Collapsing my earthly body of sin
while my spirit flies eternally
Don’t force your soul just wait on
Let your burdens take the fall
Dream inside will be reborn
So lie down
Lie down to sense the dawn
Even though this is only a short demo, - unlike the idea I posted 2 weeks ago - this is going to be developed as a serious tone. I'm basically begging for your comments, so please give me some feedback.
Another promise I'm keeping this time:
Sunday has been a really nice one. I haven't done much, but the overall feeling has been good. During the afternoon I wrote some more of my demo and jammed with my guitar. I read my homework, watched some TV and surfed the net feeling relaxed. As the week is ending, I'm not worried about the new one and am leaving the last day of the week behind ready for the new challenges ahead.
"I return to my shelter, and I crawl in a bottle; I'm losing my will for this, so over emotional/Confession of depression, this life I'm second-guessing; like ashes to ashes, I always seem to fall down...""